I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing,
On Saturday
On Saturday afternoon I went to Okaihau with my dad and
sister watch my cousins rugby game.
but first we went to get some
food. We got to pies and drinks and M&Ms.
I felt excellent because the food was delicious.
Next we went back to the game. There was a red
team and a blue team. The blue team was winning.
I felt amazed because the blue team was wasting the red team by stepping the red team out and having great ball skills.
After that we went home.
I felt excellent because I had a great day. Finally we had dinner. We had mashed potatoes and veggies.
I felt amazed because that was a great great great day.
On Saturday afternoon I went to Okaihau with my dad and
sister watch my cousins rugby game.
but first we went to get some
food. We got to pies and drinks and M&Ms.
I felt excellent because the food was delicious.
Next we went back to the game. There was a red
team and a blue team. The blue team was winning.
I felt amazed because the blue team was wasting the red team by stepping the red team out and having great ball skills.
After that we went home.
I felt excellent because I had a great day. Finally we had dinner. We had mashed potatoes and veggies.
I felt amazed because that was a great great great day.
Kia ora, Hikurangi I loved this because you got same pies. I thingk the pies's mus be yummy.
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