Here is my writing sample for term 1 2021. I think my writing has improved because I can spell more words correctly.
At the waterfall
On Friday afternoon my brother, sister and I went to the waterfall to have a swim. The water was cold but the sun was shining bright.
First me and my brother went to the top of the waterfall. My brother jumped first then I jumped after him. I did a munu my sister videoed me it was huge it was bigger then my brother's bom. After that we had a competition who can do the biggest staples but he won and I lost because I belly floped. I think that was a Awesome munu. Next we were getting hungry so my sister went to get lollies and some chips.They were Delicious.Then I jumped off the rocks and I backslaped it was Painful so I had a rest of jumping off the top. I tried to do a different bom. I tried to do a Gorilla but I couldn't do it. It was hard. Later on my sister jumped off the top it was gigantic it was way bigger then my bom. Finally we went home. Hikurangi
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