I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the published copy of my writing
This is the published copy of my writing
On Saturday I went to my Aunty´s house.
I was excited because I love it there.
Then I picked some peaches.
They were delicious and juicy.
I was excited because I love it there.
Then I picked some peaches.
They were delicious and juicy.
Next I took some washing to my nanaś
house and then she said, “Thank you.”
house and then she said, “Thank you.”
After that, I went home.
Finally, I talked to my mum about my auntyś house.
I told mum it was excellent.
I thought it was excellent.
Finally, I talked to my mum about my auntyś house.
I told mum it was excellent.
I thought it was excellent.
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