My Treaty of Waitangi video

I have been learning to use Explain Everything to record and share my ideas about the Treaty of Waitangi.

Recount Writing-My draft copy.

This is the draft copy of my writing

Recount Writing-At my Auntyś house.

I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the published copy of my writing

On Saturday I went to my Aunty´s house. 
I was excited because I love it there.
Then I picked some peaches. 
They were delicious and juicy.  

Next I took some washing to my nanaś
house and then she said, “Thank you.”  

After that, I went home. 
Finally, I talked to my mum about my auntyś house. 
I told mum it was excellent.
I thought it was excellent.  

The Treaty of Waitangi

WALT write our ideas about the Treaty of Waitangi.

The Treaty Of Waitangi

The Maori people came to New Zealand 

and lived here for 1000 years.

Then the English people came.

The English people had problems.

The Maori people sent a message to the King.

The King sent two people to help.

He sent James Busby

and William Hobson.

Then they had a meeting with James Busby

And William Hobson.

They made up some rules.

They took the rules around the country.

The people signed the rules and agreed to the rules.

That is The Treaty of Waitangi.

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